I'm revising more today so there's not much to discuss. One thing that is coming to the surface as I continue to work on this story is the complex relationship between the narrator and his roommate Dylan. Maybe even a little homoeroticism there. Okay... definitely a little homoeroticism. Sometime this week or next I'm going to switch my focus to "The Catskills" and perhaps this other story "Am I Dreaming?" and I will blog about them at that time. But for now I'm just shoving ahead with the novel. I hope to have about 15-20 pretty good revised pages by next Wednesday when I next meet with Hobby.